posted on May 12, 2008 at 11:37AM
That is a great point, especially for me, since I tend to get, uh, wordy. I read a book by Stephen King, "On Writing", and when I'm writing I keep in the back of my mind on of the most important things he said. I'm paraphrasing, but he said when he re-reads something he wrote, I finds he can almost always cut out 10-20% and make it better. I find that is true for me. I just start writing. When I get to the end, I go back and read it again. I ALWAYS cut something out and re-order stuff.
I want to make it tight as I can while being careful not to cut stuff that leaves the other stuff hanging. That's one of my biggest fears, saying something in a review the will make sense only to me. It can be a fine line, saying what needs to be said and adhering to the "brevity" rule.
Piggybacking on ChrisJarmick's post, I never try and convince someone my opinion is correct. I just lay it out there and let them decide. Once I've read a review by someone implying if I don't agree with them I'm an idiot, I never, ever read anything by that reviewer again. I hate arrogance. Hate it. My opinion is better than no one's. I'm just a dude writing what I think and hoping someone reads it.
Then I go back and check for typos. And usually miss some!