You Know Better

You Know Better Review


by B. Lisa



Overall 3.00 of 5 (by 1 user)
 




2009 Writer
OOSA
Chicago, IL
has potential
3 star rating

an avid reader

APR
12
2009

You Know Better — 

Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda...,

YOU KNOW BETTER, yet you keep making the wrong moves when it comes to love, lust and distrust. For Autumn Storm, this is the song that is set on repeat because it mirrors her life. Chance Carter, her live-in boyfriend, is out late doing his own thing causing tempers to flair. While Autumn tries to play her position, adding a curfew, voicing her opinions, Chance kills that noise when he puts his loving on the table. After all, he knows Autumn well and she simply can't resist all that he's offering. Or can she?

YOU KNOW BETTER written by B. Lisa has so much potential, but due to all of the editing glitches it fails horribly! It's this reviewer's belief that edited properly, YOU KNOW BETTER would not only be a much easier read, but one where people would be easily recommending it for others. Unfortunately, for me at this time I can't see myself doing so.

Reviewed by: Crystal



I_thumb_down You Know Better is not recommended by OOSA

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